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Friday, October 16, 2009

EDRG 3344 T/R: Persuasive

This will be a brochure with pictures but for right now here is the text.

Would you allow your children to work in these conditions and be subject to this kind of punishment or back breaking labor?
*children are being beaten for poor workmanship
*they stand in one position all day
*breath in soot and fibers
*have malformations of bones because of hard labor and bending over all day
*their feet splay because they put constant weight on one foot instead of both

If you wouldn't allow this to happen to your own children why allow it to happen to someone elses children.
*fight for better working conditions for these children if they have to work
*fight for higher working ages so that the children's bones won't become malformed because of the hard work
*fight for higher wages for the parents so their children won't have to work
*fight to end child labor

2 comments:

Randy Brown said...

Meghan this is a hardcore subject. What age group are you writing for?

Meg said...

It is for Seniors in High School.